Based on the King Oedipus book, I am supposed to describe the judgements made by the characters in the book.
When I was doing the assignment, my main focus was to identify the judgements in the book and explain the judgements clearly. However, I forgotten to link the paragraphs in my essay so my professor commented that my essay ended up looking disjointed.
The next time when I am doing similar assignments, I need to remind myself to not make the same mistakes again. I should also ask my friends to read through my essay for me.